Wednesday, February 7, 2007

Descriptive Writing Assignment 2/8

1. Find a scene in Fahrenheit 451 that had characters who were afraid.

One scene in the book that a character was afraid was when Montage was about to get run over by the kids in the car. I think that every one would be scaered by that.

2. Take one of the characters in the scene and rewrite it (or something similar) from that person’s perspective.

When Montage was right in front of the kid’s car he would take out his flam thrower and burn them all. Then he would get cught by the cops and get arested. when he is in there he would brake out and burn down the police station.

3 comments:

Austin J said...

Martin, I'm not sure that Montag would act that violently. I think he would worry more about his own safety. Even though he is trying to survive, I'm still not sure he would act so aggressively.

Anonymous said...

well. i think that this is an interesting idea, but you didn't really put it into the perspective of someone and you didn't really use descriptive words. You have a good idea, keep going with it

Anonymous said...

lol that is pretty hilarious. But I think you need to add some more descriptive language. Then it would be serious and funny at the same time.